Item: Tempest & Temptation
Rating: 5
Author: Shionokami

ShionokamiLv14yr

2020-10-01 06:07

Before I properly start the review I will say the following, while reading this I got some flash backs to Black Butler, one of the many anime I watched when I was starting to become a Otaku, and is one of the stories that I still follow to this day. Now the review, what can I say more than "I LOVE IT", honestly I don't even think I can come up with anything else but this to say, the seting is fantastic and the characters, god the characters are just amazing (Erin is the perfect type of MFL for this and it's a type of character I like a young lady from a rich family that is also spoiled and Ezra, our MML, he is so cool also the perfect choice for this, the way he plays with Erin makes me smile as I read this and hes also so mystirious that makes it even better!) and to top it all off this is very well written which is allways a plus! All in all I really liked this and you got yourself a fan!

Tempest & Temptation

NotBeatrix

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Liked by 2 people

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NotBeatrixAuthor

Thank you!!! I really appreciate it!!! I’ve also seen Black Butler and I definitely took some influences from that anime 😂. But thank you!! 💕💕💕💕

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ShionokamiLv1

I knew it! You choose the right influence for this story and I will look foward to what happens next!

NotBeatrix:Thank you!!! I really appreciate it!!! I’ve also seen Black Butler and I definitely took some influences from that anime 😂. But thank you!! 💕💕💕💕

4yr

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