Translation Quality: 5. Nothing wrong here. Stability of Updates: 5. Nothing wrong here. Story Development: 1 star. Oh boy. Hey, let me ask you something. If you received a potion (drug) that'd help you lose 20 lbs a day, would you be worried or thankful to the maker of it? (Thankful, obviously. There's no way losing 20 lbs in a single day'd have any adverse effects, right?)What would you do if you found a drunk woman on the streets, and she wasn't sober enough to give you her number or address to send her home? (Bring her to a hotel, obviously. It's not like you're pretty much right next to a police station...) Overall, Story Development is absolutely the worst, I'm not even exaggerating. Character Design: 1. Extremely forced, the characters in this novel are the least realistic thing I've seen on this site, excluding the R18 fanfictions. See (Story Development). World Background: 1. Urban fantasy, face slapping-esque, harem novel. With dumbed-down characters, to boot. I love urban fantasy, but this is just the same cultivation-modern day novel recycled over and over again, and these novels all tend to be horrible. It is horrible, actually. 2.6 stars. Lowest possible rating I can give in terms of the story, it's just crap.
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