really immersive, really good description of what the mc's doing and how he did it, it felt like im the one doing it. Its exactly what a human would do when they became a wolf cub. Although i think mc accepted the fact that he became a wolf to easy and fast, like the eating part. A bit emotional turmoil would seems great. I cant see any grammatical error, great!! More world description and power's system are always welcome in the future. I'm now interested on how the Author will do the mc's romance(if there will be any).
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