It's a good story so far, could be better but I see that the story is getting a little better especially the grammar. ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨........
Killerarrow007
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Yeah, I agree I don't know when a character is speaking it's pretty annoying, Author if you read this add "..." that's for speaking and '...' for thinking it will make it easier to read it without getting a brain ****