I’m sorry but this is straight garbage. The grammar is horrible. There’s no punctuations which makes it difficult to read. The main character is also super power. I don’t get why you make him lazy if in his past life, he did martial arts and was a millionaire that died because he was betrayed from people that wanted his money. He hides his power, cool but I find those stories simply boring as fuCk. Doesn’t want to do anything so it’s uninteresting. Everyone sees him as weak but it’s weird how the fuckIng hokage can’t see through his act. He writes a book for money but hides his name. Somehow Kushina found out. Yes , pre **** , little kid Kushina found out and blackmailed him to train her or else she’d tell everyone. Simply a bad story. If you rate something less than a 4 star then you’re just delusional.
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LIKEKillerarrow007:Bro not even the story started fully why are you making conclusion and I said he trained because for survival as for other what else would anyone write it's a freaking story
Killerarrow007:Bro not even the story started fully why are you making conclusion and I said he trained because for survival as for other what else would anyone write it's a freaking story