Review Detail of amaturewriter in REBORN AS UCHIHA
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this deserves 5 stars but 3 stars....the story is as it sounds....an SI uchiha before cannon in an[somewhat] AU............but chps are short and as interesting as it is...everything seems kinda shallow...on the plus side MC is OP...........atleast keep MC OP....build the character more...build the romance and just dont make it shallow...........if harem keep it small....also its dope that MC hides his power...... I suggest MC join anbu but keep it hidden.......and allow MC to create a clone to keep in the village?............MC could pretend to be weak and the **** everyone up by being an anbu commander
REBORN AS UCHIHA
Killerarrow007
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Yeah.. me too.. Try read root of the darkness in fanfiction . Net.. Mc in that story is intersting.. Same as yoru - dimensional gamer or something..
50ShadesOfAss:Idk if it’s just me but I find stories where mc hides his power all the time to be completely boring. And also the structure to the story is very bad and the grammar is even worse
yep...............chps are short............as for hiding power..........I like it when its done well....ie: like in solo leveling.......I am kinda tired of MC showing they are strong and then getting everything....it'd be cooler if mc hides.......just my personal preference............the concept is dope,,,,,,but its executed pretty badly..
50ShadesOfAss:Idk if it’s just me but I find stories where mc hides his power all the time to be completely boring. And also the structure to the story is very bad and the grammar is even worse
amaturewriter:yep...............chps are short............as for hiding power..........I like it when its done well....ie: like in solo leveling.......I am kinda tired of MC showing they are strong and then getting everything....it'd be cooler if mc hides.......just my personal preference............the concept is dope,,,,,,but its executed pretty badly..
yep,,,,,,,,it should be done like that,............his family .....,his love interest...no one knew it [although romance is a bit of an overstretch in SL] point is...whenever an OP MC shows his power he gets the friends lovers,etc and it kinda seems shallow....get what I mean?
50ShadesOfAss:Well solo leveling he eventually shows his power
amaturewriter:yep,,,,,,,,it should be done like that,............his family .....,his love interest...no one knew it [although romance is a bit of an overstretch in SL] point is...whenever an OP MC shows his power he gets the friends lovers,etc and it kinda seems shallow....get what I mean?
amaturewriter:yep,,,,,,,,it should be done like that,............his family .....,his love interest...no one knew it [although romance is a bit of an overstretch in SL] point is...whenever an OP MC shows his power he gets the friends lovers,etc and it kinda seems shallow....get what I mean?