Is good so far just that there are points that Gamer Mind would have acted but it didn’t work I understand that you want your MC show emotions there and there but even the original Gamer showed emotions but the strong ones get a peg down if they can harm the user... Anyway everything that you are showing something don’t add up and is the brother of Itsuka Kendo, Leo if you add Luck in the negatives will not give you some sort of unavoidable skill actually someone made a joke trying to make a Berserk “Guts” gamer and he have around 500 luck but a lot of bad thing happen to him so he found out that luck is like a pendulum it can be bad or good but is still luck you can take notes about that 🤔
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It will all be explained later and leo kendo won't appear for a while but thx for review anyway!
