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Low rating only because this **** isnt in FF......put it in FF damn it....how the hell are people supposed to find this ****............. **: just saying when you put it in FF could ya maybe re-write it...ex: instead of sharingan some other ability like bankai....aizen and yamamoto and all hollow?..why cause sharingan as amazing and cool as it is...its kinda over done....or give him sharingan and bankai..................also for harem add ultear.....save her...MC could meet her first............dont make harem gigantic...build the romance....no separation.......GL
Another system novel
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bleach ****.....probably some of the top though its most of the time ignored because of the other OP ****....just sunpo [ignore spelling] is already faster than most of the other anime moments....then there sonido
That_Guy_Is_Smart:I will make sure not to use the sharingan too much and I'll use more hand to hand combat, if you can recommend any martial arts from an anime I will be glad. thnx for the review