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Kw0z
Kw0zLv142yr
2022-09-13 11:02

Absolutely disgusting. The main character is just a replacement for his mother. Her brother (Who she lost her virg!nity to) died, so she named the MC after him, and overall, he’s just a replacement. Also, what’s with this weird thing the author likes where every single harem member likes the MC’s mom more than him? Weird.

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Layios
LayiosLv11

Are u rly talking bout this novel dude

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Yes. Not sure if you actually read it, but he is a replacement for his mother, and throughout the novel, his harem members side with her.

Layios:Are u rly talking bout this novel dude
Layios
LayiosLv11

As for him being a replacement to her late brother, maybe at first he was but later he won't be.

Kw0z:Yes. Not sure if you actually read it, but he is a replacement for his mother, and throughout the novel, his harem members side with her.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Obviously she wouldn’t say he was a replacement, but it’s heavily implied. It’s also disgusting, and completely unnecessary on the authors part to even have Ari in a relationship with her brother even if it was in the past. It held no significance to the story at all, and was just there to satisfy the authors disgusting k*nk$. As for the harem members choosing Ari, the maids have constantly sided with Ari over Earl. I don’t know if you forgot about that, but it happens. There’s also the slave girl who sided with her, and the adventurer girl who wouldn’t even get near Earl because she loved Ari. Overall, the author is a disgusting freak of a human being who likes his mother stealing his women, so he writes novels where it happens.

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Layios
LayiosLv11

Still, it's true about him being a replacement to her late brother. Hope author will make a chapter where Ari will clarify it to MC or she won't compare anymore Earl to her brother.

Kw0z:Obviously she wouldn’t say he was a replacement, but it’s heavily implied. It’s also disgusting, and completely unnecessary on the authors part to even have Ari in a relationship with her brother even if it was in the past. It held no significance to the story at all, and was just there to satisfy the authors disgusting k*nk$. As for the harem members choosing Ari, the maids have constantly sided with Ari over Earl. I don’t know if you forgot about that, but it happens. There’s also the slave girl who sided with her, and the adventurer girl who wouldn’t even get near Earl because she loved Ari. Overall, the author is a disgusting freak of a human being who likes his mother stealing his women, so he writes novels where it happens.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Yes, I was aware there would be in¢€$t, but not with his mother and uncle. Very weird. Also, it might’ve been in a joking manner, but the maids definitely chose Ari over Earl, and the only reason it didn’t hurt him is because he’s a loser who tends to his mothers every wish.

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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Oh yeah. I forgot this, but his mother already had a reason that she was fine with being with the MC. There was literally no reason for the author to add the Ari and her brother backstory.

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Layios
LayiosLv11

Well, he's a mamaboy and I'm happy it is not too much 'cause it'd be definitely annoying.

Kw0z:Yes, I was aware there would be in¢€$t, but not with his mother and uncle. Very weird. Also, it might’ve been in a joking manner, but the maids definitely chose Ari over Earl, and the only reason it didn’t hurt him is because he’s a loser who tends to his mothers every wish.
Layios
LayiosLv11

Where? It's been year since I've read first chapter

Kw0z:Oh yeah. I forgot this, but his mother already had a reason that she was fine with being with the MC. There was literally no reason for the author to add the Ari and her brother backstory.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

It definitely is too much… Half of the reason why I dropped is because he had literally no problem with his mother having a relationship with her brother, and even losing her vrgnty to him. In this entire novel, I don’t remember a single moment where he disagrees, or even goes against his mothers wishes. She says jump, he says how far.

Layios:Well, he's a mamaboy and I'm happy it is not too much 'cause it'd be definitely annoying.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Exactly. if a woman even looks in his direction, his thoughts are, ‘I want her.’ If this novel had even a modicum of realism, he would be dead from either betrayal, or because he messed with the wrong persons girl.

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Layios
LayiosLv11

I just think that Vol1-2 are just some wishfulfillment and later on author started to think about the plot.

Kw0z:Exactly. if a woman even looks in his direction, his thoughts are, ‘I want her.’ If this novel had even a modicum of realism, he would be dead from either betrayal, or because he messed with the wrong persons girl.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Yeah, but if he actually cared about the story, he would take 10 minutes out of his day, and remove the parts where the harem members choose Ari over Earl, and the part about Ari and her brother, because that was just unnecessary.

Layios:I just think that Vol1-2 are just some wishfulfillment and later on author started to think about the plot.
Layios
LayiosLv11

Well, he did whatever he want to do, we're just reader. If his original intention was a wishfulfillment then it's a wishfulfillment if later he want a ok novel then he'll do it.

Kw0z:Yeah, but if he actually cared about the story, he would take 10 minutes out of his day, and remove the parts where the harem members choose Ari over Earl, and the part about Ari and her brother, because that was just unnecessary.
BFive
BFiveLv4

Well, I agree with you guys. I quit too for the same reason. Maybe we're not too degenerate to read it.

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