Really enjoying the book so far, it's entertaining, with a bit of lewdness and romance mixed into it. The MC has a few questionable actions but so far it has been fun to read.
LamenThief
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LIKEI read each word before writing. I respect your point of view and I just wanted to know more details about your opinion in order to improve as an author, but if you don't want to be more detailed, that's fine too. Just remember that to be human is to make mistakes and the MC is just a person with a bad childhood that is nowhere near mentally healthy, so it is normal for him to make mistakes while learning from those mistakes and matures.
Maximillian:Well you'll just have to read to find out
Oh wait your the author oh f. I thought you were a reader, because for some reason I don't see an Author tag. Give me a few days so I could the give you a constructive criticism.
LamenThief:I read each word before writing. I respect your point of view and I just wanted to know more details about your opinion in order to improve as an author, but if you don't want to be more detailed, that's fine too. Just remember that to be human is to make mistakes and the MC is just a person with a bad childhood that is nowhere near mentally healthy, so it is normal for him to make mistakes while learning from those mistakes and matures.
Np. You don't have to put much effort into it or create something very complex. I was just interested because you were the first person to talk about it in a cool way. I know I have a lot to improve and constructive criticism is a good way to do that. lol
Maximillian:Oh wait your the author oh f. I thought you were a reader, because for some reason I don't see an Author tag. Give me a few days so I could the give you a constructive criticism.