Item: Bae's Smexy Fantasy
Rating: 4.2
Author: Carciphones_02

Carciphones_02Lv34yr

2020-05-07 19:19

The storylines are good!! I find the story entertaining to me. But, I do saw a few sentences and lines that can be fixed. I will talk about the summary first. You can use your own idea if you want. I only give you a suggestion. (I'm not that pro myself) " On the day of her Coronation, rebels from the enemies sect appeared. Of course, as a skilled Dragon warrior, she had nothing to worry about. That was it until she realized the bitter truth. She was poisoned!!!" Damn.. I don't even know what I did is right or not..😂😂 I don't see any mistake anywhere aside from you need to search for more suitable synonym for some words in your novel. That's all!!ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ Work hard and don't give up!!

Bae's Smexy Fantasy

BaeVida

4.7

51 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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BaeVidaAuthor

Thanks. Wud find time and input them. reading your already

4yr

BaeVidaAuthor

Please I need your help to review this book again. I deleted it and used it to join spirity. Please would you be kind to help me out? It's still the same name, please search for The Dragon Queen and kindly help me out. Thanks a lot.

4yr

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