The story somehow good but it needs to undergo some editing. It has a lot of errors but anyways nobody's perfect. So ya, leaving this review not just to critics but to give and motivate the writer to write efficiently and effectively. I'm staying tuned anyway, waiting for the upcoming chapters. Keep fighting and writing Author. You got my back, I'm your reader now. That's all, I hope it'll help you to write more interesting stories here in webnovel. đâ
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