Review Detail of amaturewriter in Vergil in another world (Reboot Up)

The MC's OP dope...the story is also interesting...just the last chp..the paragraphs were too long......make them a bit smaller,,,long paragraphs are annoying to read....anyway..Keep MC OP and smart..not a perverted idiot....Add some romance and fluff..just build it...dont make MC or his lovers shallow..if harem keep it small..Add some bash.......just dont make MC go after wives or moms.... anyway GL **: Maybe SI instead of OC?....EX: Make MC reincarnate as the master or kuroka when he got them...but change his name to Vergil...? MC is a few years before cannon...could do some ****? would be cool MC hides his power and uses a secret identity to just show whos boss....world travel...but before cannon...ex: One piece few years before cannon...?.....Fairy tail..400 years before?..or some Chinese novel??