Review Detail of kickyx in Douluo Dalu 3 Legend of Long Hao Chen

Pretty good story just a few kinks here and there that could be changed to make it better. For example, he said his martial soul was Seraphim and that no one would be able to tell since it was "extinct". But that's wrong, theres a whole clan full of Seraphim martial souls.. Theres also a bunch of descriptions about how they look like which is a obvious tell that it isnt his martial soul since Seraphim have 6 wings. Second, you're adding too much man, first you added a robot which is literally impossible since the best technology they have is a mecha that is able to be remotely controlled but doesnt have A.I. built it. Second, you added a whole new thing, "Artificial Soul Rings", if these actually existed then theres no reason for Gu Yuena, the silver dragon king to wake up since she only woke up because no one in the human side was trying to stop the extinction of her race... Thirdly, why would you have him be adopted into Tang wulins family? It just seems kind of stupid to me, just have him be sent to Intermediate school when he's 9 then have his family leave behind a note like Tang Wulins parents did in the story. Writing Quality - 3 (Some sentences just dont flow that well and dont make sense) Stability of Updates - 1 (7 months since last update which wasnt even a chapter) Story Development - 4 Character Design - 5 World Background - 5 Overall - 3 stars.