Review Detail of blue_dolphin in Coastal Love

It's a shame this story hasn't been updated for a while, because I was really looking forward to more action between Nate and Marissa! I hope the author will get back to the story some day. The writing quality of this story isn't the great. there are many spelling errors and some names get mixed up by the author as well. If you are willing to look past these issues, then (with a little imagination) this story is still okay to read. The character design is pretty good. the characters have depth and backstories. I would have like to know about Nate's age a bit earlier in the story, tho. I was imagining a man in his thirties or fourties, only to find out later he was just 28. The story moves on at quite a nice pace. Different parts of the story (the sexy times and the other times) are equally interesting, although I wish scenes were a bit longer. The setting was great and described well! I could really pictured the lovely coastal village. Very cute!