At the end of the first chapter, I would have told you that I really liked the narration, the details as well as the cleanliness of your writing and that the only thing I could criticize was the story because I don't like the genre. BUT! A few chapters later I can say that I was wrong, surprisingly you managed to make me interested in the story. I congratulate you and wish you a good continuation!
Azzack
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