Review Detail of amaturewriter in One Piece: Fae Travelogue

This is DOPE...look I am kinda sad that the MC isnt yonko level BUT eh? he is OP..just make him stupid OP....this story is interesting..MC is a few years before cannon in OP world probably close to 10..I think? And has cool powers...its cool....plus world travel..NICE,...keep MC OP..add some romance and fluff...build it....make MC a one man army..no team ****...dont make him a perverted idiotic wife stealing MC and just dont make his lovers shallow...keep him smart and cool..ex: dosnt show his true power...if harem keep it small...anyway goodluck.... **: who is the girl in chp 3?