Review Detail of Jog_Manson in Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}

Okay this is a good story to turn your brain off with but if your reading it to get a good story this isn’t the book for you. The grammar is bad but so is 90% of the other stories on this site so I’ll give it an okay. But the character are so stupid. The ninjas just don’t care about the actions he does. I mean come on he took orchimarus heaven seal AND NOBODY CARES. Let me put that into perspective, orchimaru is the WORST missing nin in recent times. For gods sake the third hokage said he was his greatest mistake, but because of main character logic he can take something that is KNOWN to be from orchimaru and nobody cares? Ninja should be paranoid because of what they do, which is assasinate people. Which is why it doesn’t make sense that they wouldnt send him straight to t&i. Another thing the hyuga clan head went out alone with no protection from ANYONE when he saw two jounin from the hygua clan be SHIPPED TO HIS HOUSE with a message saying “Your Next” I get that he’s arrogant but arrogance is NOT stupidity. I mean look at madra he’s arrogant but he’s not gonna be stupid enough to fight an opponent who he knows might be able to kill him (ran away from 6th paths naruto) So the hygua clan leader going out to train ALONE is stupid. All in all you can read it with your brain turned off but if your looking for something good it’s not for you.