Review Detail of Uncle_Sheogorath in Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}
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Not bad. However, mc to me seems to be a bit too edgy and dark but not in a good way. Evil doesn't mean mc has to be all moody and 'boring'/maybe??! I hope mc eventually becomes better in personally while still being evil. Also, the mc being Hyuga and being sent to the orphanage is quite stupid as the clan would NEVER allow one their bloodline being out of their reach. Why do you think they have the whole eye x seal on foreheads thing? Its to PROTECT their unique bloodline and him being left alone seems quite realism breaking.
Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}
I_Am_Soh
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If they were ignorant of his heritage then yes I agree but after they find out about him then he would be probably forced into the clan one way to another. After all, Hyuga is one of the main clans with lots of political power behind Konoha.
I_Am_Soh:Btw, it's not realism breaking if you think about the reasons why they didn't take him in the first place. As I had responded before in an earlier comment.
Yeah, I totally agree. It's just that they weren't sure about him yet so there was no reason to fight for him at that time. I doubt the senju would allow him to be forced around like that too. So it's going to be some conflict between them to see who gets him.
Uncle_Sheogorath:If they were ignorant of his heritage then yes I agree but after they find out about him then he would be probably forced into the clan one way to another. After all, Hyuga is one of the main clans with lots of political power behind Konoha.
I_Am_Soh:Yeah, I totally agree. It's just that they weren't sure about him yet so there was no reason to fight for him at that time. I doubt the senju would allow him to be forced around like that too. So it's going to be some conflict between them to see who gets him.
I_Am_Soh:Yeah, I totally agree. It's just that they weren't sure about him yet so there was no reason to fight for him at that time. I doubt the senju would allow him to be forced around like that too. So it's going to be some conflict between them to see who gets him.
Whoo will she be and oc or a character from the anime???? And what evil will he be will he do evil for the sake of good/for his own benefit Or will he be evil for the sake of being evil? ?
I_Am_Soh:Yup.