Review Detail of ShirasakiSan in Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}

Item: Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}
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ShirasakiSanLv33yrShirasakiSan

Its ok for now but why must there be a spacing/gap when u start a new paragraph. And one thing I hate about fanfics is when people use dialouge in this way Naruto : I am Naruto. Kakashi : I am Kakashi

Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}

I_Am_Soh

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I_Am_SohAuthorI_Am_Soh

Just to indent lol. I do that when I start a new paragraph in general so that's why. Hmm, about the dialogue, do you mean using it in that format in general or being redundant about the characters stating who they are when their names could clearly be seen? And thanks for reading!

3yr

ShirasakiSanLv3ShirasakiSan

I meant the format. Cause you cant really feel any emotions from it

3yr

I_Am_SohAuthorI_Am_Soh

Ohhhh, okay. I did this format because I feel like it looks a lot less messy than the normal one I usually use.

ShirasakiSan:I meant the format. Cause you cant really feel any emotions from it

3yr