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Katsik
KatsikLv35yr
2020-03-07 08:57

Это очень хорошее начало, я хочу больше, пожалуйста, пожалуйста, xumi sensei. Поведение всех персонажей, это логика для меня, Локи зла, но не так, как другие, где поведение богини с миллиардом лет

High School DxD : Phoenix Scorching Sun

X_Karma
4.9
8 Chs

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X_Karma
X_KarmaAuthor

So I would like to point out that this is my first novel. My grammar is not best but I believe it will improve during the course of the story (I also use app grammar checker before I post this story). So please don't give bad reviews due to grammar. And please tell me if there are wrong grammar in comment section.

5yr

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

more chapter . please. ................................................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
Rain_Miko
Rain_MikoLv14

Sensei I'm here give u 5 star because u got my 3 point ,, 1.the story is interesting because first its use reiser lol make twist story I like it ,, 2. His power of cheat is first come I like that , and 3. This power point I like that is harem because I'm fans of harem story 🤣🤣 "milf squad always standby" btw hope yasaka and grayfia in list 🤣🤣 ,, even pray for venelana but I think its hard so grayfia and yasaka it's OK because there many of people reading like grayfia and yasaka lot 🤣🤣🤣

5yr
MikXL_23
MikXL_23Lv4

Hey there! I've finished Reading your chapters and I can only say... Damn I'm impressed. You choose a really interesting Path to your story. Riser as the MC? That's a thing one cannot find It easily here, pretty much all DXD fanfics I saw their protagnist is either Issei or a stupidly OP OC. Your english is pretty good too, Honestly I don't really care about grammar as long it is readable. Well for some suggestions. Do not make the MC OP, you should do a slow but steady growth in his Character and strength.

5yr
Origen_dark_angel
Origen_dark_angelLv3

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5yr
THE_EXPERTS
THE_EXPERTSLv3

Hey tell u is it dropped???? U have to tell us otherwise at least update a chapter or two once in a while AUTHOR..........because the long wait is becoming annoying.......

4yr
Kurogane21
Kurogane21Lv2

Good chapter,,,,, good harem,,,,,, more milf,,,,,,, and battle,,,,,don't make our mc play sissy like hid his power or lile fool like want to become hero ... So make more

5yr
SYIHAAKIRA
SYIHAAKIRALv14

Hello there F_Karma. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

5yr
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

it's good so far, author should make the chapter longer though. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

5yr
jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

death issei xd. ALL your harem pa riser. .. ...................................................................................................................................................

5yr
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