Overall ive enjoyed the story quite a bit. How he was able to cast high level spells early on is kinda bull to me but at the same time, eh being nitpicky I guess sorry author. Some grammar issues here and there but nothing that makes it illegible I appreciate how the main character has been written and while the Ron bashing seems excessive... I like it. For me the character development overall (not just MC) is the best part of this fan fiction Thanks author I dont do reviews too often bit felt like it for your story
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