Review Detail of KELLEY in LOVE ME IF YOU DARE

I KNOW MY WRITING SKILLS SUCKS BUT STILL CAN'T YOU AT LEAST LEAVE A COMMENT SO THAT I CAN DECIDE IF I SHOULD CONTINUE WRITING OR NOT . I KNOW I SOUND SILLY BUT I SWEAR IT'S MY FIRST TIME WRITING SOMETHING LIKE THIS . I DON'T MIND BAD COMMENTS I JUST WANT A FEEDBACK. 😔 🙏 THE RATING I GAVE MYSELF IS APPROPRIATE IN MY EYES AS THIS IS THE BEST I CAN DO