The writing quality is very good, comparable to the best books I have read on this webside so far. The Story development and characterdesign are solid, nothing out of the world but I don´t see anything bad there. The worldbuilding is bad. While most parts are okay, there are some that came out of the blue without any warning. Especially the Esper abilities were so unreasonable I nearly stopped reading.
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