Reader here to give some reviews. The writing equality is nice and readable. Although the words is not that deep but that makes it good for those who really like reading Fanfic. The protagonist in this story (Yu Long) didn't know exactly how profound this world yet. Unlike some other Soul Land fanfiction that has some advantages knowing the future events by rencarnating. Although the Mc in this story is not an anomaly in the universe, his personality gives an unwavering perseverance and desire to reach his goal by travelling the world and finding his parents/family. It also makes his character fleshed out giving him extreme motivation and a solid goal. Because a lot Oc in other stories is like a blank paper that doesn't have a trait ,unlike this story that really shows Yu Long character. The character design is nice but I hope its becomes more vivid. the protagonist power is not also a illogically overpowered. Well he is strong, stronger than Tang San when he was younger for around 2 years. Tang San is a brokenly overpowered as we know. I also hope and expecting for updates because I like the story.. Yeah read this if you want a overpowered chill main protagonist that dont act like a dick but mature and highly intelligent with a cheat powers.
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