Review Detail of StorySmith in Library of Lost Things

Author here! I will shamelessly give my book a 5-star review. If I don't like my story then I wouldn't have started writing it ^_^. I'm new at writing so any advice would be much appreciated. My release rate will be inconsistent as I have uni and other projects I'm doing but I'll try and release at least 3 chapters a week. This may change if the novel gets more popular or if I have more time in my hands. The average chapter length after the Prologue will be 2500-3000. Lastly thanks to all the people who have read or are going to read my novel. I hope you enjoy the story as much as I enjoy writing it!