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Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv65yr
2020-02-29 09:27

The only bad things about the story are sometimes the author mixes up similar words like were (pronounced w-ere) and where (pronounced w-air) The pronunciation is how I differentiate them. Godly grammar for webnovel. I also hate how often people apologize to him after bringing up his past. I used ctrl-f to check, and the word sorry is used 181 times. It isn't how often the word is used though, it's how that after every time they ask about his past they apologize a few times when the questioning goes too far. This is more of a personal thing for me, I've just heard these types of apologies too much at funerals. There's also the fact the fact that even though the setting is in fairy tail, it's more of a lord of the rings/shadow of Mordor story if we're talking about the feeling it gives (excluding the harem.) This isn't a bad thing, because I love it. Don't expect a smooth sailing power trip, and don't expect bad things to only happen at the start before he surpasses them and has an easy life. He will have good times, then bad times. It will continue in an unpredictable cycle, keeping you on your toes. Don't expect his friends to always be safe, they fall into real danger and like the lord of the rings taught us, the power of friendship doesn't always prevail. (unless you're a demi-god like gandalf) The best example is when frodo went through the spider cave in the lord of the rings. Even though we knew he was the protagonist, with how we've seen the rings corruption along with the feeling the story gives, we had butterflies in our stomach the whole scene. You can only keep a strong will and try to continue walking. He's really strong, but the darkness will always hold powerful creatures. Spoiler about the thing everyone mistakenly calls ntr in the comments: In the later chapters on fanfiction.net that haven't been uploaded here yet, one of the girls he likes gets raped by the guy that abandoned her and their daughter while the protagonist isn't around. No, she didn't like it, no she didn't accept it, no she doesn't love the rapist. Like I said, bad thing CAN happen, but this is the worst of it and the protagonist got satisfying revenge quickly.

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Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

it says my reading status is chapter 1, but I've caught up to the latest chapter on webnovel. It says chapter 1 because i loaded all of the chapters up on a single page and used ctrl f to see how many times the word sorry is used. It snapped me to chapter 1 because that's when sorry is first used.

Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

Can i know who got raped?

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

Bisca. It wasn't the guy she married in the original, that poor guy got friendzoned

Requiem_Soul:Can i know who got raped?
Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

Like fully raped? Does asuka got raped as well?

Hentai_Senchou:Bisca. It wasn't the guy she married in the original, that poor guy got friendzoned
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

You're a little sick to mention that second one, did you not read what I wrote? There's no difference between raped and fully raped

Requiem_Soul:Like fully raped? Does asuka got raped as well?
crimson666devil
crimson666devilLv5

Thanks for letting me know, got no problems with the author but I just can't handle a story with Ra*pe in it at all so thanks for letting me (us) know

Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

No i m just asking lol cause you said the girls and their daughter so you cant blame me for asking that lol. Btw i m asking this cause i dont like rape and i dont want to continue reading it. I hate rape.

Hentai_Senchou:You're a little sick to mention that second one, did you not read what I wrote? There's no difference between raped and fully raped
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

I said ONE girl that he likes. Last time I checked, anyone would love such an adorable daughter. I even said bisca without saying asuka

Requiem_Soul:No i m just asking lol cause you said the girls and their daughter so you cant blame me for asking that lol. Btw i m asking this cause i dont like rape and i dont want to continue reading it. I hate rape.
FalgaGS
FalgaGSLv13

Just wanna ask is this a fairy tailXlord of rings crossover fanfic? If it is who is the Mc btw? Need spoiler 😝

FalgaGS
FalgaGSLv13

Oh by who the Mc is i mean what chara he is from the lord of rings or from which story he is based on?

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

It is a crossover. The mc's name is strider, though he isn't the strider you're thinking of. He's OC. He was a part of the journey to destroy the ring in his backstory and became a noble after the war. His main strength is telekinesis and swordsmanship, though he also has powers similar to talion from shadow of mordor. He was also shown taking a fort with talions help once. He followed a legend about another continent to the south as a vacation after the war and flew to the continent of ishgar from the fairy tail anime. Middle earth is a continent extremely far to the north of ishgar, seperated by seas so violent that you need to be extremely strong AND be able to fly to cross it since the water is too violent to take a rest break. I don't remember what direction it was in for sure. There's another continent near middle earth that is much easier to get to and I think it's the world of the dragon age games, though don't quote me on that because the author hasn't gotten into that continent much. Even though most of the story is in fairy tail, middle earth is still slightly involved.

FalgaGS:Just wanna ask is this a fairy tailXlord of rings crossover fanfic? If it is who is the Mc btw? Need spoiler 😝
FalgaGS
FalgaGSLv13

Oh thx bro this helped as i only just started.

Hentai_Senchou:It is a crossover. The mc's name is strider, though he isn't the strider you're thinking of. He's OC. He was a part of the journey to destroy the ring in his backstory and became a noble after the war. His main strength is telekinesis and swordsmanship, though he also has powers similar to talion from shadow of mordor. He was also shown taking a fort with talions help once. He followed a legend about another continent to the south as a vacation after the war and flew to the continent of ishgar from the fairy tail anime. Middle earth is a continent extremely far to the north of ishgar, seperated by seas so violent that you need to be extremely strong AND be able to fly to cross it since the water is too violent to take a rest break. I don't remember what direction it was in for sure. There's another continent near middle earth that is much easier to get to and I think it's the world of the dragon age games, though don't quote me on that because the author hasn't gotten into that continent much. Even though most of the story is in fairy tail, middle earth is still slightly involved.
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Caught up after a while, I've read both fanfics of this author. I can only mention two issues with this author's fanfics: 1.- Sometimes the people's reaction to the MC's past is overly dramatic, although I really like the reactions It sometimes goes as far as a lot of people always feeling pity for him. I can say that compared with other fanfics that don't have any main character's background whatsoever this is better by miles but still, I don't like overly dramatic things even though I love drama quite a bit. 2.- You use many sentences too many times for each situation for example: "How are you?" "As good as I'd hope to be" is repeated a lot and that's just one example. Bad things aside... Those two fanfics are really some of the best I've seen and I'm really looking forward to them, I really believe it won't be long until they're in top 5 at least or top 10 and I say so because except for top 3 there are a lot of fanfics on top 10 that can't reach this work by miles. What I really love the most is how you joined those worlds in a way they make sense and it is not like every fanfic where some otaku meets a god and reincarnates and that's it. But it is like they're two fanfics together, fanfic of fairy tail and one of Tolkien's universe together. Honestly, I've never read or seen any movies of that franchise but now I feel like it. I read beware my power first and consider it one of the best DxD fanfics I've read just below "A new life in DxD" that got on hiatus and began reading this one not thinking it would be better than BMP but reality said otherwise because this one is utter monstrosity as well really looking forward to the story and the way you're handling the harem is also splendid, as long as it doesn't end on NTR I wouldn't mind some drama like what happened to Bisca things like that will make the MC get serious with his harem and settle things.

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