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Review Detail of amaturewriter in Hadrian Black : The Abandoned Prodigy 你好,我的名字

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yramaturewriter

Not going to lie...I like it..Stupid OP [has potential to be ] and no one knows.. dope....look so far its made out [somewhat] MC's parents are ****..so keep it that way...separate them,,,, no bonds fixed and at worst bash them...people like neglect fanfics but hate it whenever family relationships are magically build back..dont do this...Make MC hate or just ignore his family forever...also bash if you want..just dont make MC save or care for his family...keep him OP but make him smart and use it wisely,,,make him dark or grey.....bash..add some romance and fluff and if harem...keep it small and build it..and pls no wife stealing or any issei type ****....And just no crossovers...but maybe world travel?...Anyway goodluck and goodshow

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Hadrian Black : The Abandoned Prodigy 你好,我的名字

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EvilWolf
EvilWolfLv11EvilWolf

if its mc doing the wife stealing i like it

Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

What do you mean no wife-stealing almost every single person in the Harry Potter universe got married Luna got married,Ginny got married just about every single person in that universe got married Unless he goes the whole Daphne route and has him marry her

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

first off dont like your own comment.....also it took me a while to get it but yah,,,,what you say is both correct and incorrect cause its a paradox...[I hope you know why?]

Primordial_Phoenix:What do you mean no wife-stealing almost every single person in the Harry Potter universe got married Luna got married,Ginny got married just about every single person in that universe got married Unless he goes the whole Daphne route and has him marry her
Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

Why can't I like my own comment And yeah I probably should have worded that better but I'm too lazy to deleted it and comment again **: I just liked my own comment, b**** 😜😁

amaturewriter:first off dont like your own comment.....also it took me a while to get it but yah,,,,what you say is both correct and incorrect cause its a paradox...[I hope you know why?]
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

nah you idiot,,,,,anyone can tell when you like your own comment

Primordial_Phoenix:Why can't I like my own comment And yeah I probably should have worded that better but I'm too lazy to deleted it and comment again **: I just liked my own comment, b**** 😜😁
Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

I usually like it because the more likes it has the better chance someone actually reads it 😂 Lol sorry if I offended you oh great amateurewriter

amaturewriter:nah you idiot,,,,,anyone can tell when you like your own comment
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

you are forgiven......mongrel

Primordial_Phoenix:I usually like it because the more likes it has the better chance someone actually reads it 😂 Lol sorry if I offended you oh great amateurewriter
Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

Thanks my Lord!

amaturewriter:you are forgiven......mongrel
StrongLead
StrongLeadLv2StrongLead

yeah idiot

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

what you mean?

StrongLead:yeah idiot
God_of_Perverts
God_of_PervertsLv5God_of_Perverts

How is it wife stealing if the girl is currently single? The moment someone writes an AU, SI, or adds an OC, all canon relationships go out the window.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

the hell?.............I meant **** like MC going after naricissa or some**** like that

God_of_Perverts:How is it wife stealing if the girl is currently single? The moment someone writes an AU, SI, or adds an OC, all canon relationships go out the window.