As of ch 20 Ive read a lot of system stories. And the first thing i noticed is that the novel is very face paced. But it lacks a lot, it lacks depth in characters the main female. The fl in my opinion does have any charismatic quality yet, to grab my attention to fall deep in love with her and the novel early on. This novel lacks early world building. Even if it has magic they just brush paced the very basic of the basic to continue the flow of chapters but not the whole (at least no yet). The characters introduced are background characters and tying in to being faced paced the fl build connections to these background charcters very quick. Like it feels forced not seemless like i see in other novels. I.m.o i rate the novel maybe a 2.5/5. Its on the weaker side to reincarnation/system genre. So take it with grain of salt.
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