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ValestriaMoon
ValestriaMoonAuthor5yr
2020-03-15 21:15

Hi Everyone! It's Author san here, finally ready to give her shameless review! This is the first-ever novel I have published here on Webnovel so I hope you all are enjoying it so far! <New World New Life> is the story of a woman's adventure through this fantasy world! She will face plenty of obstacles, meet both friend and foe. She may or may not meet the person she had been searching for, you'll have to read to find out! Writing Quality: I try to edit as much as I can before I upload, although I will admit that more can be done! I am open to feedback, so please let me know if you have any! Stability of Updates: I am aiming to maintain 1 chapter a day at 11.00 am (GMT +8) for as long as this novel goes~ Cross my fingers I might be able to get an extra chapter out here and there! Character Design: There will be tons and tons of characters that come through the story, only a selected few would recur throughout. I try and make them unique from one another so that they don't all feel the same. World Background: This World (maybe worlds?) is vast and contains multiple continents. Do not be surprised to see inspiration from real-world places too! If you have any questions and comments, please feel free to leave them here too! I would love to read them and answer them too! Have an awesome day! <Updated as of 15th March 2020>

New World New Life

ValestriaMoon
4.6
491 Chs

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Baby_Girllll
Baby_GirllllLv2

Your doing a great jon Author san 😍

5yr
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Emily_Krebs_9411
Emily_Krebs_9411Lv4

👍

5yr
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biane_
biane_Lv10

Hello author-san!!😊 is your book free?? I hope it is😔 it is just depressing to read awesome novels but ended up not being able to finish it. Well, I just hope it is hehe. And author-san, if you're in need of something maybe I can help. I'm pretty capable in most grammar constructions and such but not that great of course hehe. Good luck author-san! We're rooting for you!🤗

4yr
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ValestriaMoon
ValestriaMoonAuthor

Hi! Thank you so much for your comment ^.^ Right now it is free to read but I do plan to have premium chapters and stuff like that in the future! I will give an update in advance. Thank you very much for your offer! If you do spot anything, please feel free to leave me a paragraph comment and I will look into it.

biane_:Hello author-san!!😊 is your book free?? I hope it is😔 it is just depressing to read awesome novels but ended up not being able to finish it. Well, I just hope it is hehe. And author-san, if you're in need of something maybe I can help. I'm pretty capable in most grammar constructions and such but not that great of course hehe. Good luck author-san! We're rooting for you!🤗
4yr
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biane_
biane_Lv10

The pleasure is mine (⌒o⌒) that's okay! A long as I have some coins in store hehe and i hope for your very first novel to have more readers!^ω^

ValestriaMoon:Hi! Thank you so much for your comment ^.^ Right now it is free to read but I do plan to have premium chapters and stuff like that in the future! I will give an update in advance. Thank you very much for your offer! If you do spot anything, please feel free to leave me a paragraph comment and I will look into it.
4yr
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ValestriaMoon
ValestriaMoonAuthor

Thank you! 😭 You’re too kind~

biane_:The pleasure is mine (⌒o⌒) that's okay! A long as I have some coins in store hehe and i hope for your very first novel to have more readers!^ω^
4yr
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biane_
biane_Lv10

Not too kind but yeah hehe I just want to help thru any means^ω^

ValestriaMoon:Thank you! 😭 You’re too kind~
4yr
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biane_
biane_Lv10

Not too kind but yeah hehe I just want to help thru any means^ω^

ValestriaMoon:Thank you! 😭 You’re too kind~
4yr
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Novia_Jackson
Novia_JacksonLv11

I look forward to reading this novel

4yr
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JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

In the summary the first line should be written as ‘Did you just reply to me’ Just thought I should let you know, also this definitely looks like a great book so far. 👍🏼

4yr
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ValestriaMoon
ValestriaMoonAuthor

Hihi! Thank you! Oh that’s actually a great idea! I will work on editing that. Glad you’re enjoying it so far ^.^

JimmyBlah:In the summary the first line should be written as ‘Did you just reply to me’ Just thought I should let you know, also this definitely looks like a great book so far. 👍🏼
4yr
Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5

The tags say slow burn does that meen romance

ValestriaMoon:Thank you! 😭 You’re too kind~
4yr
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ValestriaMoon
ValestriaMoonAuthor

Yes it does~ A small sprinkle of romance.

Matt_pike:The tags say slow burn does that meen romance
4yr
MANI_BALI
MANI_BALILv4

hey is it Yuri?

1yr
ValestriaMoon
ValestriaMoonAuthor

Hi! Ah no, it’s not 😎

MANI_BALI:hey is it Yuri?
1yr
MANI_BALI
MANI_BALILv4

oh...ok

ValestriaMoon:Hi! Ah no, it’s not 😎
1yr
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MANI_BALI
MANI_BALILv4

😨😢😭😔

1yr
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