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amaturewriter
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What do you do when you are transported to another world?...tell another person that you are from another world ofcourse, I mean its the SAFEST AND SMARTEST thing right? RIGHT? fucking hell...think man,,,think...dont write stupid ****... If you were captured by people in another world, why the **** would you ever tell one of them that you are from another world,,,stupid

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Misfortune In Caltresnia

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Liberty523
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Lol you're not wrong. I appreciate the comment! the main thing is right now the MC thinks he's "smart" when in reality he's a bit... inept. However down the line he will have some major growth. I hope you enjoyed the chapters so far, and have a great day! Chapter 10 will be up by Friday if you're up for the read.

amaturewriter
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nah man, that is stupid, any person that got kidnapped wouldn't tell someone who lives with the kidnappers some top secret info about himself, its common sense, so yah...retarded MC are trash, I am out...BUT GL to you, I dont like it cause I hate stupid MC, others might like it,,,so yah....just enjoy writing and you do you

Liberty523:Lol you're not wrong. I appreciate the comment! the main thing is right now the MC thinks he's "smart" when in reality he's a bit... inept. However down the line he will have some major growth. I hope you enjoyed the chapters so far, and have a great day! Chapter 10 will be up by Friday if you're up for the read.
Liberty523
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Nothing wrong with a stupid MC as long as there's growth. However if MC stays that way, then yeah I can see it being trash. Always will do my own thing, good luck on your writings too.

amaturewriter:nah man, that is stupid, any person that got kidnapped wouldn't tell someone who lives with the kidnappers some top secret info about himself, its common sense, so yah...retarded MC are trash, I am out...BUT GL to you, I dont like it cause I hate stupid MC, others might like it,,,so yah....just enjoy writing and you do you
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

again, nothing wrong with growth MC,,,BUT what you did was retarded, this dude was a sensible ***** that did what he did, this is why I hate it...stupid MC and growth MC are different, what you made was a retard, and hence I see it ass garbage, its such a simple mistake and yet it just sticks out like a pimiple...no bash

Liberty523:Nothing wrong with a stupid MC as long as there's growth. However if MC stays that way, then yeah I can see it being trash. Always will do my own thing, good luck on your writings too.
Liberty523
Liberty523AuthorLiberty523

No worries, everyone's got their own opinions. I made the MC how I wanted, so that's all there is to it. Enjoy your day my dude.

amaturewriter:again, nothing wrong with growth MC,,,BUT what you did was retarded, this dude was a sensible ***** that did what he did, this is why I hate it...stupid MC and growth MC are different, what you made was a retard, and hence I see it ass garbage, its such a simple mistake and yet it just sticks out like a pimiple...no bash