An interesting plotline with an attention gripping pace, vocabulary and imagery is good too. Expression of emotion is nicely incorporated . Like the flow of this story
don_offl
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LIKEDon't be discouraged by one less star, I'm sorry I'm only on webnovel for a few days so I'm still figuring out the ratings but if anything this story really got me interested. Good luck and happy writing!!
don_offl:Thank you very much Mia, I'm glad to hear that my mistakes didn't mess with the flow but still would have liked to get 4 stars lol (shameless author ding....)
Nah I won't get discouraged that easily because I have a crocodile skin lol, besides only zero stars could discourage me and if I get anything more than a zero, it means I'm doing something correct, right? Anyways thanks for reading my novel and taking some time to write this review
MiaSilver:Don't be discouraged by one less star, I'm sorry I'm only on webnovel for a few days so I'm still figuring out the ratings but if anything this story really got me interested. Good luck and happy writing!!