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Nike13K
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2021-08-19 14:04

It isn't bad, but the plot is too "slapface" if that makes sense to you. Haru just does things and they work out perfectly. What makes Reverend Insanity Reverend Insanity has been basically stripped away and Haru rules supreme in this weird reality. I didn't expect Gu Zhen Ren levels of writing, but this was kinds bad IMO. If you want to see a traditional cultivation MC slapface Fang Yuan, then you might like this story, but I ain't buying it.

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Alpha_Venerable
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I would attribute his advantage to the future knowledge he has and some luck. However, I can understand if you don't buy it. I will also expand on some things in Book 3 to create a more logical consistency because that's when some of the major plot points will be revealed.

Nike13K
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TBH you can just say heaven's will helped him out and be done with it. Heaven's will is so strong against anyone below rank 9. It can probably influence all these events to go perfectly, kinda like what happened with Fang Yuan in the original. Though the interference of Heaven's Will is a bit too blatant and that isn't its style, so maybe a bit less believable.

Alpha_Venerable:I would attribute his advantage to the future knowledge he has and some luck. However, I can understand if you don't buy it. I will also expand on some things in Book 3 to create a more logical consistency because that's when some of the major plot points will be revealed.
Alpha_Venerable
Alpha_VenerableAuthor

No comments on Heaven's will. (´ω`) that's a spoiler territory

Nike13K:TBH you can just say heaven's will helped him out and be done with it. Heaven's will is so strong against anyone below rank 9. It can probably influence all these events to go perfectly, kinda like what happened with Fang Yuan in the original. Though the interference of Heaven's Will is a bit too blatant and that isn't its style, so maybe a bit less believable.
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