Review Detail of Jay_Patson in Utopian Heirs

This book keeps getting better and better.My reading has been almost flawless,oI don’t have much to say about the characters except that everything about them is fine tuned.Their emotions are well expressed.Id really like it if you were to give more detail to the world around them and how it affects them.It would really help bring more emotion and picture to the book,after all nature does play a part on one’s mood.One more thing,I’d like to hear more on the dojo that Jason so proudly boasts about...😁Cant wait for the next chapter!!!