Review Detail of Izaya_Karasuma in Reincarnated In Naruto [Naruto Fan-Fic]
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Hello everyone. This is Onetim3. I just want to address a few things. First, to Heaven_Sage. I am not angry that you posted my story on this website. Instead, thank you for supporting my story. It's fine to keep the story here on this platform. I assume you uploaded my story onto this website because you like this platform better? However, it would be nice to have a heads up if you (or anyone) would like to use or post my story content somewhere. I'd probably say yes, but like I said, it'd be nice to know about. A quick PM to my fanfiction page: Onetim3 Or a message to my email: one3time3@gmail.com Either one would suffice. Second, to Alfha_Robby, thank you for your kindness in taking the time to let me know that my story is being uploaded on other platforms. I greatly appreciate your initiative. And lastly, to everyone who has read, reviewed, liked, supported, and critiqued, both the good and the bad, all of it. I would like to extend my gratitude to all of you out there. I understand that the story is not the best and it has its flaws, however if you appreciated my work even just a little, then I sincerely thank you. Writing stories are never easy. Especially since this one was pretty much my first. I was still getting into the groove of things and honestly wrote it for fun. I had an idea one day and wrote it down. Then I started expanding on it as more and more ideas came to me. Before I knew it I had an outline of a story. I wrote like 9 chapters and uploaded them all in one day on a whim because I thought it was a waste to keep them to myself. I honestly didn't think that anyone would pay attention to my story. What I thought at the time was this: "Hey, if people like it then great, if not then it's fine." I don't know if I had actually ever planned to complete the story at the time, but before I knew it people started reading, reviewing, liking, and following my story. I was honestly shocked and honored. I didn't want to disappoint all those who read my story and so I did my best to complete it. Lone behold I had made it to the end and Part 1 was finished. I was able to finish because of the readers. To be honest I never planned to write a Part 2. I had planned to just end it with Part 1 and be done with writing, but the more I wrote the more readers continued to support me and so I decided that, if I had more ideas for a story I'd continue to share it all with you. So once again, thank you. Alright, that's all I had to say. Sorry for the extremely long post. Thank you everyone who still continue to support my stories! P.S. I'll give my story an average rating. It was the first story I actually dedicated myself to write and it does contain quite a bit of flaws. Are there things in hindsight that I would change? Yes. Will I ever go back and write a remastered version? Maybe one day. -Onetim3
Reincarnated In Naruto [Naruto Fan-Fic]
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You could’ve done something truly amazing but the whole story took a turn for the worse during the 4th war arc. Your mc isn’t even in the main battle against all the op opponents its actually lame The whole time he couldn’t even fight full power because he had low chakra and was injured. Smh While everyone is fighting Madara and the other reanimated people, your MC go fights Kabuto Seriously, I was expected some exciting battle between MC against Madara and reanimated people but in the end, it turns into a huge disappointment. You force it so much with mC is being called a god of Shinobi for something Naruto could’ve easily done as well.
Mc doesn’t do crap for the final battle. You had him do nothing. You gave him Op abilities but he does NOTHING during the war it’s actually so disappointing holy crap. He has wood style, EMS and other op abilities but you had him fight Kabuto. You made every other character op and take the spot light to fight The other op villains but again, mc doesnt do anything. When mc arrives in the battle of six paths Madara, I got excited thinking he’d actually fight him but NO he needs Naruto and Sasuke’s help and he barely fights Madara because the dude does the moon eye jutsu thing. Any readers who sees this. If you wanna read about an mc who has op abilities but doesn’t do crap then read this. Whole fourth war arc was a huge disappointment. Author made Haku so op he was able to fight reanimated Madara and Hashirama. And where is the MAIN CHARACTER in all this? Fighting dam Kabuto Geez this story is straight garbage
yeah he is a good writer. But in the end he just like the manga author, the best of the best in the end r team 7. I question the mc existence. is he even needed in this fanfict story line?
50ShadesOfAss:You could’ve done something truly amazing but the whole story took a turn for the worse during the 4th war arc. Your mc isn’t even in the main battle against all the op opponents its actually lame The whole time he couldn’t even fight full power because he had low chakra and was injured. Smh While everyone is fighting Madara and the other reanimated people, your MC go fights Kabuto Seriously, I was expected some exciting battle between MC against Madara and reanimated people but in the end, it turns into a huge disappointment. You force it so much with mC is being called a god of Shinobi for something Naruto could’ve easily done as well.
Согласен, история довольно средняя. Однако до 40 глав, это была очень интересная и живая история, с качественным сюжетом и проработанными персонажами. Однако после 40 глав, медленно пошли нелогичности и косяки. Поэтому только 3,5. Где можно почитать другие ваши работы? Мне очень понравилась ваша манера подачи истории.
Вот именно. Абсолютно с вами согласен. Сначала сделали главного героя OP, потом ввели какого-то Тенгу. Всч арка про войну - сплошной бесмеслынный фарс, особенно не каноничные призывы мертвецов. Прям разочаровался. Я весь выходной читал фанфик, потратил 14 часов.(((
50ShadesOfAss:Mc doesn’t do crap for the final battle. You had him do nothing. You gave him Op abilities but he does NOTHING during the war it’s actually so disappointing holy crap. He has wood style, EMS and other op abilities but you had him fight Kabuto. You made every other character op and take the spot light to fight The other op villains but again, mc doesnt do anything. When mc arrives in the battle of six paths Madara, I got excited thinking he’d actually fight him but NO he needs Naruto and Sasuke’s help and he barely fights Madara because the dude does the moon eye jutsu thing. Any readers who sees this. If you wanna read about an mc who has op abilities but doesn’t do crap then read this. Whole fourth war arc was a huge disappointment. Author made Haku so op he was able to fight reanimated Madara and Hashirama. And where is the MAIN CHARACTER in all this? Fighting dam Kabuto Geez this story is straight garbage
Author san Part 1 was good for me although i got annoyed many times on how the mc kept spouting cringe jutsu names and his rasengan/sun sphere was suppose to be extremely op but u basically nerf it. The thing i like about this novel is that the way the mc described and talks about world peace,a village a clan and the collective stuff i was very impressed. Most fight description is abit boring as you should have made it simple but i can understand if its your first time. Overall mc strength is nice not extremely op but enough to make do. For those who says mc looks weak in his fight against madara six path and kaguya Read it carefully or maybe you lack understanding of naruto cannon? Mc chakra was absorb same with vitality by senko so he was in a weaken state even if he wasn't in a weaken state he was only stronger than naruto or sasuke if they fight 1v1 But if both sasuke and naruto fight him in his non weaken state it will still be hard for him to win. Mc wood style? Just look at hashirama he was beaten badly by madara six path And dont expect just bcus he have wood style and sussano he can fight madara six path if he use wood style he will have to focus on it so using sussano together will be tough as he was young only 17 years old and cant use the combine might of it plus he weaken low in chakra so use brain