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GooseElite
GooseEliteLv13yr
2021-07-29 06:03

long pages made book. a little hard to read though. Once you started reading, you got stuck. Spools on the middle part of the book. Have always had a bit of a hard time with world jumpers. but it works. Not alwasy the most thriling and a bit dispointed in the world chosen. As a hole a solid book.

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