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KoroSensei14
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I’m guessing at some point he’s going to choose to reincarnate into Star Wars with a good backstory and younger then his actually age maybe at like 15 years old At a time of his choosing like maybe 5 years prior episode 1 instead of random everything with some other champion like bastille and then use all his points to become op giving himself the force and make it so he can’t be corrupted by it along with other things like improved physique or mind. but still leave enough points so that if he dies he can still reincarnate with his memories again and same gender (gotta always keep a backup plan even if he plans to live long in Star Wars). Or at least that’s how I would set it up just giving some suggestions.

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Thanks. Will keep this in mind. Next week will be a double chapter. In case you are interested in giving your feed back again. Will be going over his last SB encounter in a long while. It will also cover his introduction to star wars. I was thinking of starting with an age of 5. That way any info he has can be discounted due to age. But not solid on this idea yet.

KoroSensei14
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Yeah I guess his age depends on how when you want to bring him into the world I always thought it would best to be 20 years old at the time of episode 1 so your body’s strong and you’d still be at a young age of 30 for the clone wars. And he’s probably want to get their a couple years early to prepare and gather info, strength, and resources so if he’s 5 years old when he arrives then maybe have him arrive 10-15 years prior to episode 1.

KoroSensei14
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Your synopsis backstory is really good to. Waking up in a junkyard is definitely a good way to start in Star Wars since you have access to resources and don’t have to worry about people noticing a change in you as you practice your powers and he’d be off the radar until he’s ready.