Review Detail of Bodhisattva_Panda in Ben 10 : Unlimited
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This novel is STOLEN. that's why I'm leaving a low rating. This novel is STOLEN. that's why I'm leaving a low rating. This novel is STOLEN. that's why I'm leaving a low rating. This novel is STOLEN. that's why I'm leaving a low rating. This novel is STOLEN. that's why I'm leaving a low rating.
Ben 10 : Unlimited
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author sup....might be a weird place to communicate but I gotta say..good to have ya back.............loved your ****...BUT...just saying izuku seems weak....like he is underestimating or looking at people like they "projects"...and whilst this is dope...he dosnt have the power to back it up...ex: like in USJ yes he was smart but he was just as strong as he was in cannon..he barely did anything.........also his dual personality....kinda stupid but also interesting though it makes him more like a pansy........look all I ask is that he remains cold but not evil..dont keep his personality soo fragile,,,,this an FF so maybe something different....atleast make him torture bakugo or beat him up....not friendship or rival...I just want a BNHA where bakugo suffers...............also add some romance and fluff.............**: maybe for momo...make her create a nano tech suit like iron man.................................**: gotta ask....is this going to have a generic bakugo and mido relationship where they fix their relationship......if so I ma drop...so could ya tell
Hello, don't worry about weird way to communicate, I'm just happy there's someone that cares so much about my novel that they went onto a different page lol. here's a quick summary of everything I can tell you without ruining the future story, reply back to me if you found this helpful or just more confusing. Izuku's power will rise as he gets more quirks and he has started to notice the projects are dangerous in recent chapters. was the same strength as cannon? I thought I made him slightly stronger, enough to beat the other two villains beside Nomu. He doesn't have a dual personality, the 'Deku' is just in his head, he's in complete control. as for your concerns, I understand what you're saying, a lot of people tend to make an evil Deku and then just make him good, in the end, I assure you I have no plans for that. that's why there's all these situations around him, I want him to build the character for evil since he's only recently switched from that innocent 'Deku'. Romance, well I haven't really thought much about that but I have kept Momo and Uraraka on standby if I change those plans but, I feel like romance might ruin his evil edge. however, ill try add some intimacy or whatever if I can, ill most likely pick Momo but Uraraka is on standby just in case. as for friendship and rival etc, everyone except for Izuku can be killed.
amaturewriter:author sup....might be a weird place to communicate but I gotta say..good to have ya back.............loved your ****...BUT...just saying izuku seems weak....like he is underestimating or looking at people like they "projects"...and whilst this is dope...he dosnt have the power to back it up...ex: like in USJ yes he was smart but he was just as strong as he was in cannon..he barely did anything.........also his dual personality....kinda stupid but also interesting though it makes him more like a pansy........look all I ask is that he remains cold but not evil..dont keep his personality soo fragile,,,,this an FF so maybe something different....atleast make him torture bakugo or beat him up....not friendship or rival...I just want a BNHA where bakugo suffers...............also add some romance and fluff.............**: maybe for momo...make her create a nano tech suit like iron man.................................**: gotta ask....is this going to have a generic bakugo and mido relationship where they fix their relationship......if so I ma drop...so could ya tell
Bodhisattva_Panda:Hello, don't worry about weird way to communicate, I'm just happy there's someone that cares so much about my novel that they went onto a different page lol. here's a quick summary of everything I can tell you without ruining the future story, reply back to me if you found this helpful or just more confusing. Izuku's power will rise as he gets more quirks and he has started to notice the projects are dangerous in recent chapters. was the same strength as cannon? I thought I made him slightly stronger, enough to beat the other two villains beside Nomu. He doesn't have a dual personality, the 'Deku' is just in his head, he's in complete control. as for your concerns, I understand what you're saying, a lot of people tend to make an evil Deku and then just make him good, in the end, I assure you I have no plans for that. that's why there's all these situations around him, I want him to build the character for evil since he's only recently switched from that innocent 'Deku'. Romance, well I haven't really thought much about that but I have kept Momo and Uraraka on standby if I change those plans but, I feel like romance might ruin his evil edge. however, ill try add some intimacy or whatever if I can, ill most likely pick Momo but Uraraka is on standby just in case. as for friendship and rival etc, everyone except for Izuku can be killed.