Review Detail of bunnyreadsabook in Reincarnated into Side Character: This Alchemist Hates Being Called #2

It is always fun to see different people's take on eastern fantasy and this one is no different. I can tell that the writer put a lot of effort into fleshing out the world and inviting the reader into it. Transmigration is always a fun genre to dabble in and the author makes it fun to read. My only critique would be making the introduction a little more intriguing, make it more of a hook. As I read on the story got better but the intro was a little misleading.