Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in Arthur and the Mystery of Reincarnation (Unpublished)

Superb, this one. The erlier chapters may have some slight grammatical errors, probably just small oversights, but over time the quality of writing really shows improvement. The story's pacing is well done, with natural sounding dialogue and adequately described environments making the world come to life. Keep on writing👍You'll probably get contracted eventually.