There’s really lots of potential here. Wording, grammar, plot, is good. I wish updates would be stable. It would be good to do self promotion too, author, to let your work gain extra exposure. It’s a good book, and I hope updates would stabilize, since there’s a lot of potential here.
JeshuaDimaano
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LIKEThank you for your review. I really appreciate it. I have to agree that my latest updates have been lackluster, but I'm now working on it again to update at least five chapters per week. Anyways, I'm really happy because it's my first review here and this really gives a big boost to my motivation. :)