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although it not the nonhuman mc the story itself is beyond good it's eggcellent

So.... I just caught up on your other story and I just have to say... this is diffrent. I didn't expect you to be bold enough to go through with a torture scene. I thought it was interesting. I also thought that the shazam powers were pretty cool. I didn't expect it. I haven't seen that in q fanfic yet so I gotta give you props.

At first I wasn’t sure I’d like it but you proved it before that you’re a great writer and I can not deny this I hope you continue writing mmr and this masterpiece you have two gold mines don’t let them collapse 🔥🧡

For all the readers who want to read this ,that's my opinion : So let's begin with the wishes ....they are more or less good ,could be better but could be worse . If you want to know the wishes more in detail then you have to read the FF. And for all the People who are dissapointed in the wishes (me too a bit ) he is getting a lot more powerful then the he seems to get . For example he is getting more powers ....you know like you could get the Speed Force with a specific Chant ( he did not get it till yet and i am not sure if he ever will ) . The grammar is good and more then readable . I hope the Story progresses the way i imagine because i would like to have another cool DC FF in my Library .

Only negatives are the silly wishes and stability of update Otherwise this novel is a gem In depth details regarding mc thoughts and plans, really intriguing work

So I didn’t give it five stars because it is not a finished product (** will come back and give a review when it’s completed) and so far what I’ve seen is that there is updates but it is infrequent but they have pumped them out every 1-3 days so you don’t know when you’re going to get the next chapter. Now with negatives aside this is a great product. In that they tie in allot of elements from the DC universe in with so far little to no flaws through out the book and so far no glaring grammatical errors (unlike other fanfics on this site). Another positive is the pitfalls of many fanfics like Op mc/ harem mcs which so far he has not implemented :). Finally this title starts with a mc that can be built upon and grown into something that I think we as an audience can appreciate. So final review my personal review on this fanfic is a (can’t give it a numerical grade with the stars) 9.75/10 also side note thanks for all the hard work that you put in author even though I just binged all your work. Stay healthy, safe, and clean through these trying times- BallisticBunny

I love the book and you have a great writing style and idea of the story is great and the interaction between characters is great and an extra plus for me is that it is a DC book I like fanfics about DC but most of them are dropped soon after they are started. I don’t usually comment or review I am not lazy but since I’m the latest chapter you said how you fell I will comment and say my opinions more often because this is a great book and I hope you don’t drop it cuz it’s one of the best fan ficus I read. But I suppose the only thing I dislike is updating stability but it isn’t that big of a problem because I don’t have a problem waiting a bit longer

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