Review Detail of Kiiara in The God's Prophecy

This story has a great concept, esp with the war between God and Demon. This looks promising although there’s room for improvement in term of writing. Try to make the dialogues more realistic and natural, imagine if u were the characters, what would u say? Oh, and do break the paragraph down. The writing block is too messy. Anyway, keep up the good work, Author! Good luck! 😁✌🏻