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Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in The God's Prophecy

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Occassional grammatical hiccups here and there. Story is fairly decent, though dialouge could use a bit more polish. Might want to break up some of the larger paragraphs too make whoever's speaking clearer for the reader. Overall, a story with potential. Keep on writing.(^^)

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