Review Detail of amaturewriter in Traveling the multiverse as Harry potter
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Its as interesting as it sounds but why the low rating....extremely short chps...most of it is info...character development is almost non exisitent...by reading the latest chp..I think its safe to assume the MC is going to be an issei type generic SI -MC that just travels worlds and collects women...hopefully I am wrong and everything will improve cause the concept of this ff is quite interesting
Traveling the multiverse as Harry potter
Imabethatguy12345
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N0_Hope:And it seems this was a super old coment and now you cam back to deliver a impotent MC ...
look all I ask is that you build the romance....if harem keep it small...make the MC smart and OP and not some idiot....anyway goodluck and goodshow
Imabethatguy12345:Thanks for reading my book no this mc will not be like that sorry excuse for a man but he plans on traveling the omniverse which is a big place so having just one women is impossible again thanks for the support you know I'll combine the chappys once im done.
Imabethatguy12345:Thanks for reading my book no this mc will not be like that sorry excuse for a man but he plans on traveling the omniverse which is a big place so having just one women is impossible again thanks for the support you know I'll combine the chappys once im done.
Imabethatguy12345:Are you just saying that just hecause the story is a no harem? I’m confused
Not only that I can see that the updates are not reliable but you changed a harem story to a non harem one. Just for that fact is enough for me to not give it a chance... and if we add now what the main coment said about the story then I have no reasons to read it at all.
Imabethatguy12345:Are you just saying that just hecause the story is a no harem? I’m confused
I underStand then, I am not pressuring anyone to read my book so whether or not you decide to stay or go is your choice,as for the no harem thing, thats just my Personal view, everyone has there own perspective on things and I respect that, but that is just mine, sorry for the dissapoIntment and goodluck.
N0_Hope:Not only that I can see that the updates are not reliable but you changed a harem story to a non harem one. Just for that fact is enough for me to not give it a chance... and if we add now what the main coment said about the story then I have no reasons to read it at all.
Imabethatguy12345:I underStand then, I am not pressuring anyone to read my book so whether or not you decide to stay or go is your choice,as for the no harem thing, thats just my Personal view, everyone has there own perspective on things and I respect that, but that is just mine, sorry for the dissapoIntment and goodluck.