Review Detail of VamsiKrishnaVK in Don't Be An Impel Down-er (One Piece SI)

I like this but I hate it. It made the one piece world too dark. I applaud you for the story though. The way the character lost his maturity and humanity year by year is intresting. You mature as you age but the character became childish. I wanted to finish it but I can't. My psyche can't take it. I have added it to my library and will hopefully read it again when my mind isn't full of dopamine. But I hate that you made the MC an si. He could've been an OC because ultimately that is what he became