this is one of my favorites now i just can't wait for more. i hope the auther won't stop writing this story i hate when the make a good story and give up halfway through or at the beginning.

Are you going to continue this story or improbe it , or are you just stealing it? -------------------------------------------------------------------

MC born in impel down suppose to be rebirth but seems like he become idiot.. well not idiot maybe just have Stockholm syndrome ------------------------------------------------------------------

The writing is great, because even the story itself and MC were frustrating, you'd still want to read it. I was also expecting an SI, but mostly everything were OCs and the locations were never mentioned from the original source. So that really cramped the immersion as I read.

I like this but I hate it. It made the one piece world too dark. I applaud you for the story though. The way the character lost his maturity and humanity year by year is intresting. You mature as you age but the character became childish. I wanted to finish it but I can't. My psyche can't take it. I have added it to my library and will hopefully read it again when my mind isn't full of dopamine. But I hate that you made the MC an si. He could've been an OC because ultimately that is what he became

Yow author thanks for this, Can you also upload additional fanfics from different platforms, Base it on the "My SI FANFIC STASH", pick one you like there, Cause i like to listen to novels, but i cant read them while on duty, only listen, Thanks in advance if you decided to upload them here, Sorry for English bad