Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Ascension Of The One.

Bro I like this..the fluff and purpose of the MC and the godlike MC are all dope...all I ask is that you build the romance...keep it happy and fluff no angsty tragic ****...no perverted issei type idiotic MC or wife stealing....its just sad..also the harem..dont make it stupid like 15 or 20//////....keep it small..also bash characters,.... anyway goodluck and goodshow