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I'm sorry to destroy a five star rating this story is great, but I love being mean to people I'm close to lol. *Ask the author, she's used to it, I'm motivating her this way* Sooo.... I've read the polish version long time ago. This is SUPER DUPER ULTRA SLOW BURN. This book will have about 60 chapters and Spoiler starts here Kalena and Galaspiael's relationship starts AT THE END OF THE EPILOGUE. In the LAST SENTENCE of the part one we get the "I love you" from both of them. Relationship blooms in book two which isn't finished yet and not ready for translations. SPOILER ENDS HERE What do I like WoK for? Character development. Part one is focusing mainly on the heroes. But it's worth to wait because we get really well crafted heroes. My most hated thing in part one is world creation. I know this is a debut and all but seriously get yourself together girl. It's like you having a Mona Lisa like characters painted on a blank wall without a background. Luckily in the part two the focus is mainly on the world and action is really fast.