Hello there author... I hope you don't mind my review... To be honest, your up to date story is good enough... The only thing I can see is a bit of immaturity in writing and bad English which both could be fix by writing more and practice more... So my advice would to continue writing and you would be good...
bilu619
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LIKEI don't mid at all instead i welcome it Progress can only come frome practicing that is my maid set I love when people coment or review couse it means they are engaged in wht you are writhing Thank you for sharing your thouths with me. I will try to improve even beter and yas i will keap writing to get that gooood exp And level up from a novice to a normi
Don't worry, just read more and practice... It's all depend on your hardwork to real a good English language novel and practice writing... Rome is not built in one day... You already have the talent...
bilu619:I don't mid at all instead i welcome it Progress can only come frome practicing that is my maid set I love when people coment or review couse it means they are engaged in wht you are writhing Thank you for sharing your thouths with me. I will try to improve even beter and yas i will keap writing to get that gooood exp And level up from a novice to a normi